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Tanz_TheWise

Tanz_TheWise

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2020-10-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Commented

    Singkat banget epsnya huhu

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    Horror · Nara_Eander
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Replied to Paper_plane

    People went to dungeon not only for the rewards, they're likes to killing things lmao

    Ch 3 Buying More Floors!
    Dungeon System: World Of Chaos & War
    Fantasy · Monster_Paradise
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Commented

    Pada paragraf "saat mereka di perjalan menuju pasar" sampai predict menanyakan "kalian mau melihat" itu terjadi pengulangan obrolan dan kata2, kalimat, dan paragrafnya pun sama. Can't wait for the new chap tho, semangat author 💕

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    Horror · Nara_Eander
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Commented

    What's itu mengacu pada "what is." jadi penggunaannya salah, harusnya what aja, semangat author! 🍻

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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Commented

    Memutuskan tanpa berunding sama temen2nya, duh idaman sekali nada ku 😩

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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Commented

    Mungkin "shall we begin, looking for siska?" lebih enak, sesuai grammar juga, but, mistakes makes perfect. 🍻

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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Posted

    Kinda catchy at first, just like another fantasy novel/comic with a bit uniqueness, recommended to those who seek for fantasy novel/gamers. Might change my review later

    Dungeon System: World Of Chaos & War
    Fantasy · Monster_Paradise
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Commented

    This is just similar like "The Gamer" at Webtoon

    Ch 1 Another World!
    Dungeon System: World Of Chaos & War
    Fantasy · Monster_Paradise
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Replied to RoyalDerp

    Lol

    Ch 1 Another World!
    Dungeon System: World Of Chaos & War
    Fantasy · Monster_Paradise
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Replied to WantToBeIsekaid

    They're whining about the game is kinda unbalanced smh

    Ch 1 Another World!
    Dungeon System: World Of Chaos & War
    Fantasy · Monster_Paradise
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Posted

    There's some typo at chap 3 and 4, ain't bothering me though. `am at the middle of the chapters. Cool story and understandable btw, might change my review later, cheers writers 🍻

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    Horror · Nara_Eander
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  • Tanz_TheWise
    Tanz_TheWise3yr
    Commented

    Nada gemesin yaak wkwkwk

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