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2020-10-14 JoinedUnited States
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Commented

    This is a bit late and perhaps you already have one, but Im looking to become an editor and am an English major. Editing for you would be great practice with the added bonus of your amazing writing.

    Author's note: So I probably should have named Doevm's Lich-self, so in this chapter I will leave it at Lich-self. I do have a name in mind thanks to Alphaaffe. Tell me if, no scratch that, when you are confused in the comments, and I will try my best to help you through your confusion and revise this. It's at times like this when I wish I had an editor. I really hate that I have to ask readers, the ones who should just be enjoying this, to help. I'll try to figure something out in the future. I apologize.
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    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Posted

    This is the only boom I’ve continued reading on this site. Honestly, that says it all right there. Word count word count word count word

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    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Commented

    It was so good, Im late but dont care. I’m enjoyIng your book so much

    Ch 11 Strength vs. Skill
    altalt
    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Posted

    This is so good- probably One of the best books I’ve read from an ******* author. Everything about it is wonderful and creepy. I don’t think I’ll ever be able to Put this book down ☠️

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    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Replied to Zackiller

    Yup yup 😰

    Ch 4 Rose Thorn
    altalt
    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Commented

    So good so far, loving the writing!

    Ch 4 Wish
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    The Soul Eater's Possession
    Fantasy · MysticAmy
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Commented

    Great writing, keep it up! Suggestion: use either ‘ ‘ when writing inner dialouge or in italics, it works better than [ ]

    Ch 1 That One Trope
    altalt
    Touch of Fate
    Fantasy · mobius_factor
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Posted

    I’ve only read the first chapter so Im not exactly wualified to give a detailed review, but just wanted to give my first impression. overall the storry seems white interesting and the characters intriguing and overall unique, but either the execution or the translation is ruining it for me. too often are the character’s names mentioned so it doesn’t read as smooth as it could be. Other than that, keep up the good work!

    altalt
    When Cats Own Superpower
    Urban · Bear Wolf Dog
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  • graygam
    graygam3yr
    Posted

    The quality is pretty good, definetly great wuality for how fast artists are expected to profuce comics. The development is a bit fast- which is rather surprising for me to say. Overall I think it’s well done and executed, but could perhaps need more of a focus... As for character development the male leads seem to be generally the types you see in any book/comic like this. Unfortunatly not too original, but still well done.

    altalt
    Beauty and the Beasts
    · Webnovel Comics
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