There is some grammar error

I think writing It differently is better that way we focus on one person and not get it mixed up

Author where is our update 🥺🥺🥺❤️ please

author why are you not updating, we are waiting you are keeping us hanging

wow that was kind of fast but what about jer although I still want Esme and Al but shouldn't she break of the engagement first before mating it is still like cheating to me and Esme was fast in fixing there wedding earlier

so if they have reconciled what happens to jer the mer because Esme is to calm.

so it is because of the cristal ball that the king took in Esme or is there more to it....[img=update][img=update]

Esme have come again with her lie again🤣🤣😂😂

okay

when was the comb made I don't understand

Author what I don't understand is how Cedric and Harden are both twins and where they born from jasmine, please explain

ooh this story is very interesting I love their chemistry, dear author you are doing a great job 😘😘😘👍👍

The story is really going well, Esther and Theron deserves there happy ending they are going through a lot. Author you are really trying a lot keep up your story is enjoyable and exciting.