Totally enjoying this book. All of the explaining about the strategy, etc. seems a bit boring but it is fully necessary to visualize what is happening. Great job!

Still a total thumbs up!!!!! Great job!!

Just when I thought this book couldn't get any better! You are amazing!!

Great chapter!! Great book!! Amazingly written!!

A big thumbs up!!! Never would have thought of chili powder. Great imagination!!!

Why did they leave the body of the horse behind? I would have thought, "Food" and butchered it. The hide could have been used as well. The one made of rocks was a great plus to the story. Added a bit of levity to the moment and a bit of calming to the tension that all of the battles had caused. Great job!!!

Not boring at all! Anxious to read more. Looking forward to it!!!

Totally enjoying this book. Very well written.

One of your sentences states that "they were approaching from the far". "the far" should be "afar".

"there're" is not a proper contraction. It is always two words.

"I reckon" is an American colloquialism. It is seldom used except in certain areas. The more accepted way of saying this is "I believe".

Just let me finish reading THIS book.

If something is "overpowered", it is defeated. If something is super strong, it is "overpowering". Love love love this book. It is masterfully written. Every chapter is a page turner. Kudos to the author. Best fictional book I have read. Would recommend it to everyone!!!!

Did you mean to say "death stroll"? Shouldn't that have been "death toll"?

Did not expect how this situation unfolded. This book is so amazing! The author is incredible! So talented.

Still my favorite book. This is amazingly written. Truly talented writer!!

I am thoroughly enjoying this book. The humor mixed with the surprises are very entertaining.

I know that you are translating this story from another language into English. There are a couple of translation errors. We do not say that someone "leaked" a smile to his mouth. We simply say "he smiled". A leak is something that a liquid does.

I have no idea what "kufufu" means. Is that something that would be said where you come from? If it is meant to mean that you are joking and the other person takes what you're saying the wrong way, we would say, "Hey, come on now."

I made an error in my statement. I checked my notes and the distance you stated was "a little over a thousand meters".