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The background of the world that the author came with is interesting and not overused in other novels, though it is still very simple. The life of MC before reincarnation was kinda too much, like not even realisitic, it gives forced vibes too much, dunno if it's on purpose for plot or not. so yeah it can be said to be an amazing start, however it became absolutely bad and uninteresting at chapter 15-16 when the two half souls: Rei(old) and Raven(young) fused together. the author said it would be slow fusing but no, he literally forced it with the plot to create a new personality with the old memories, conclusion : no hope for character development and healing of Rei's mentality. stopped reading at that.
thanks for the chapter also what did the broly inheritor go through for his scenario. Assuming it's super's broly, then logicaly speaking it should either be: beat gogeta which is impossible as seen in the movie. beat Goku and Vegeta which is too easy for the inheritor as also seen in the movie, cuz they needed to fuse to stomp him and finally survive against gogeta for a period of time, and thats pretty much guaranteed because gogeta won't kill him, and there was no one close to them that could be killed (by Frieza or broly) for gogeta to kill broly out of anger.
click bait description don't fall for it if that's what you were expecting. MC kinda fluctuating between being a reincarnater and being a retarded kid, dunno why though. plot is interesting if you have the patience, however the mc is not really that redoish character. World building is good with no info dump, but a bit of a sluggish feel to it, like the world outside of MC is slow and nonexistent.
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love your work, and thank you for the chapter. But when will he use the grimoire he got? I'm really curious about what it will be.