Laura_Ganskow
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Again too many privileged chapters... Very frustrated by this.... Im not buying more privileged chapters right now. Last 10 I bought cost 348 coins in addition to the regular 9-11 coins per chapter... I'm taking a break from this book solely because of the extreme amount of privileged chapters that are published (again the top 10 authors on here don't publish this many privileged chapters) It saddens me to have to take a break from this story..... ❤️
Your book has more privileged chapters by a long shot than most of the authors on here... Including top authors like Ash Knight... That is a downside to reading your work... It cost me more to read your work than it cost me to read the same amount of chapters of someone else's work... Please take lowering the amount of privileged chapters into consideration. Lots of authors here have found that too many privileged chapters (especially on books not trending in the top 10, but even those too) tend to alienate and lose readers... In the end, if you have less privileged content but more readers come and stay then you will make more money in the long run... I say this with the upmost love and respect 🙏
Suggestion- You should write what the maid noticed instead of saying "whatever" she noticed... If you don't feel something is important enough to give details about it then your story can likely do without it 😉 As a BIG Supporter of your work I hope you take or consider my suggestions in the positive light that they are meant❣️I very much enjoy your work and want nothing but the VERY BEST FOR YOU❣️
Comments are encouraging, of course they are... But what's more important is to follow your dreams of writing and happiness in writing no matter what others say or don't say! Be uniquely YOU❣️I am PROUD OF YOU❣️
I lost my mother to stage 4 lung cancer she was 53 and then my grandmother died of stage 4 lung cancer after my mom at age 75. My grandmother was my EVERYTHING❣️She is still with me everyday! She molded me into the person I am. Noone or nothing can take away her wisdom and love she instilled in me❣️When I pray to the Lord at night I often ask him to connect me to my grandmother and then I talk to her and fill her in on everything going on in my life... I find it helps me feel extra close to her❣️🥰
Suicide is NEVER the answer love... Without the hard times and bad days and without darkness we wouldn't appreciate the good times or the light❣️Your writing brings light to those who read your stories❣️Remember this always! Print and save this and other positive comments and read them on the rough days❣️🥰
The lessons and love of your Mother will ALWAYS BE WITH YOU! In that way your Mother will never leave you❣️So cry only happy tears and know that your Mother IS PROUD OF YOU❣️🥰Deep down you know this to be completely true❣️❣️❣️
Do you have a proofreading group or any editors? Preferably English-speaking ones? You have great ideas and great storytelling abilities and you could greatly benefit from a reader feedback group and editors. Again overall storytelling ability is good but could use some refining in some areas that would take your writing up a major notch! I BELIEVE IN YOU AND YOUR WRITING ✍️ ✨️ ❤️
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