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definitely going eastern style story. pill/potion making for qi? really? I enjoyed this story because it wasn't the generic style focusing on technology instead of cultivation style techniques. why has the author changed this? losing interest in the story and it was doing so well
this changed from an American based story to an Eastern including the name xin and chopsticks. and his parents lived in a house previously and then moved in with him near the research facility. and the author in a previous chapter forgot the the fathers' name was Doug. lack of continuity after the submarine battle is an issue. Including the professors names