The story is good as a reader we do well i dont like it when authors write "omg, rn, gtg" stuff like that. For me that is just a no for me, Instead you write "oh my god, right now and got to go" this is just a minor complaint im not trying to be mean or discourage you i just want you to become better as a writer. Hopefully you would take this minor complaint and better yourself with it.

THIS COMIC IS AMAZING, the only complaint i have it that its locked at chapter 19 i mean i think its bs because there are cliff hangers and i really hate those and some people are less fortunate than others meaning that some people are poor and cant afford to pay for coins or some peoples parents wont let them buy coins. Other than that complaint the comic is amazing greatly detailed the art is amazing and im really into bl and ive read alot of bl books/comics and this is my favorite one ive read so far but i think this one will always be my favorite