Kathryn_Daffodoll
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All emotion he feels has to do with Lory and what her reaction would be... not curious abou t the place only what Lory will do there😂😂😂🤣😂😂😂🤣😂🤣😂
Rice cookers save so much prep time though!
Umm... forward much?
...sure... you go ahead anc think that Bernice
While *he is gazing* at me
The quality of this book is top-notch! The writting flows so seemlessly, word choice is fonominal and I’m absolutly in love with the plot! I also really apprciate the proper grammer and the utter lack of typos (at least that I noticed) because thats pretty rare in the books I’ve read on WEbnovel so far and it dispays a level of care you take worh your work which is extremely admirable! If I could give this book six stars I would—Can’t wait to read the next chapters!!
Ridiculous not rhetorical
Everything *went* wrong...
She is refering to the story about the ring and the reason its named eternity
No need to be sorry the typos in the story dont majorly effect the flow of the story like in some novels😉 I love your writing style and the story btw
“...we had met, *so I*...”
“...so I climbed* into bed... so I could* watch her...” I think you accidently mistyped the first word and the second correction is in the same tense
Is it meant to be “I had ‘condoned’ a lot...”
I sever*... no e at the end
“For some reason”... hUH,huh😉😏(wink,wink,nudge,nudge)
Would love to read colume 2