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TH3L0LG4M3R

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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R12d
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    How many sunglasses does he have on him?

    As Boris stood up, he wiped the flesh from his knuckles. He took out another pair of sunglasses from his coat, leaving the corpse on the ground as he hid his eyes once again under the unfeeling plastic.
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R12d
    Commented

    You can't just leave important things in the creators' thoughts, man. Now I wonder how many other pieces of story I missed in them.

    Ch 117 6th Street
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R13d
    Commented

    What.

    '672-0'
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R13d
    Commented

    Oh no.

    The Nightmares, the Stars... Mangchi clawed at his chest as a searing brand glowed in his flesh, hidden by layers of clothing.
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    TH3L0LG4M3R14d
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    He’s going to die, isn’t he.

    But Asher wasn't ready to go to sleep just yet. He slung himself out of bed and prepared to go outside, wanting to check out these 'Sweepers' that Mei warned him about.
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R10mth
    Replied to Isaiah_Smith_6196

    I have no idea where you can find editors, since I don't have one. I just check the chapters for spelling mistakes myself.

    Ch 19 Rewarding victory and crushing defeat
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R10mth
    Replied to ChrisJ56

    I'm not gonna spoil anything and I'll just say: soon :)

    Ch 14 Savior
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R10mth
    Replied to sparsh_garg

    Remember this is Jacks view of the events. There may have been something else going on behind the scenes that he didn't know about.

    They stormed our home - an abandoned farm in the middle of nowhere - and just started shooting us. No reason whatsoever. Before we even knew we were being attacked it was too late.
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R10mth
    Replied to Shajid

    Whether that's possible or not will be revealed in of the next chapters, so look forward to it.

    Ch 12 Shapeshifting
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R10mth
    Replied to TheGrammarNazi

    A little bit, yes. Although for everything that's similar between this story and that one there's gonna be twice as many differences, so don't worry about this just being a copy.

    Ch 1 Rebirth
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R11mth
    Replied to TheEvilDragon23

    Thank you for pointing that out. It was supposed to be level 1 in the previous chapter. It should be fixed now.

    Ch 10 Tier 2 monster
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R11mth
    Commented

    For anyone wondering what the leather armor looks like, it's supposed to look somewhat like this.

    After putting on the armor and clothing - which was a horrible experience, since they were bloody - and picking up the sword, I took the lantern which fitted unto a special 'hook' on the waist part of the armor meaning I didn't have to carry it. I looked back at the blood - the only thing remaining of the person who died here.
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R1yr
    Replied to TheEvilDragon23

    I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :) You can expect the next chapter this saturday

    Ch 6 Massacre
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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R1yr
    Posted

    I know, shameless self review, but I don't really have a way to get my story out there otherwise. Also, let me know what you think since I'm new to this stuff and any help/suggestions would be greatly welcomed.

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  • TH3L0LG4M3R
    TH3L0LG4M3R1yr
    Commented

    This is hilarious

    Shaking their chins up and down rapidly, began to do a turkey call. "Gobble gobble gobble." Needless to say, I gobbled.
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