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OrganicEmu

OrganicEmu

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2020-10-08 JoinedSweden
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu21d
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    I really like this book. the current development with the Westeros continent is exciting too read. i would suggest adding a strong antagonist and some family background. keep up the good work. Tjillevippen

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    Hogwarts : leveling up the world
    Movies · The_last_airbender
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu2mth
    Commented

    +1

    Option 2: harry potter villain
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    Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
    Movies · souryourer
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu2mth
    Commented

    That was hilarious. Would be awesome if you paired Asmodeus with Jean or Hela.

    Ch 81 Chapter 81 - The Ancient
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    Hogwarts : leveling up the world
    Movies · The_last_airbender
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu2mth
    Commented

    Really love this direction the story is going. The writing gets better for every chapter.

    Ch 78 Chapter 78 - Reflections on Magic with the Ancient
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    Hogwarts : leveling up the world
    Movies · The_last_airbender
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu3mth
    Replied to The_last_airbender

    That's great. I have grown bored of novels were the MC have the "Gotta Catch 'Em All" mindset.

    Ch 75 Chapter 75 - A journey?
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    Hogwarts : leveling up the world
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu3mth
    Commented

    Yes!!! Looking forward the next chapter. And the pairing with Rowena was a good choice. Don't know how i feel about harem but don't go overkill please.

    Ch 75 Chapter 75 - A journey?
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    Hogwarts : leveling up the world
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu3mth
    Posted

    I love this book. It would be awesome if you transformed it to a multiverse story. Please don't drop the book.

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    Hogwarts : leveling up the world
    Movies · The_last_airbender
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu8mth
    Commented

    What happened to Lilys parents? I can't remember reading about them. They would be the better choice

    "But I didn't have many choices—I believed at that time that you were the secret keeper so you were out of the question, the Longbottom's were in hiding under fidelus so even I couldn't find them, James had lost his parents during the war so he had no immediate family left and, Remus was so devastated that one of his friends had betrayed the others that he was in no position to look after a toddler, so the only option had been Harry's last living relatives... the Dursley's,"
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    Sirius Black (SI)
    Book&Literature · LazyWizard
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu9mth
    Posted

    This is not readable. The grammatical errors are one thing but all the misspellings make it tiring to read. The idea is very good. I like a good Thor fanfition and this has potential. Try to reread your chapters before you upload them. sincerely A loyal reader

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    THOR : THE GOD OF THUNDER
    Anime & Comics · david_vazcano
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu1yr
    Commented

    Björn is the swedish word for bear.

    "Right, I should have introduced myself first before asking your name, where are my manners. My name is Rob, nice to meet you Björn. Hmm weird name, Björn."
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    Werewolf Lord through the multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Bjorntjuh96
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  • OrganicEmu
    OrganicEmu3yr
    Commented

    Continue please. This novel is fun and interesting to read. Would be a shame if you dropped it. Sincerely A dedicated reader

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    Douluo Dalu: Era of Tang Ming.
    Anime & Comics · PrimorDious
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