OrganicEmu

I have never heard anyone use the word monkey to describe an Asian in real life. These interactions don't feel real to me.

London was originally founded by the Romans in 43 Ad. The original name was Londinium. So the history of London is roughly 2000 years old. I think i started as a simple trading port.

You wrote earlier that magneto and the brotherhood confronts the mansion in Westchester? So is magneto flying once a month from Poland just to harass the X-men?

"Daughter"

Why not have him trying to connect with his inner spirit animal or something, trough his meditations. His animagus can also be a non magical counterpart to his patronus. A sparrow maybe?

Would he really be this cruel? He's turning into an evil warlock. I dont think Arwen would approve of his experimentation on living creatures. Did he lose his emotions when he ascended?

Great job in translating Chinese novels. But to give your readers a good experience, you should delete the Chinese stuff. Harry potter is English not Chinese. Anyway the translation is of good quality. Keep up the good work.

Yeah no this is shit. The story was great and well written but this is not my cup of tea. You should have gone with Daphne only. Ciao

kratos hip? Didn't Zelos save him from that fate? He freed Mimir from the roots.

Sure they can be considered to be ageless but they still have a lifeforce that can be sacrificed. Everything has a price, and what price is greater but a ageless beings lifeforce? But I can't remember reading about the jötnar being ageless. Just long lived like the Aesir.