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underinmoonlight3yrReplied to DivineHyperof course , I am really grateful for that , honestly this is my story i have written and published and i have just started doing this and learning . so even forming sentences , correct use of different symbols and everything is hard ,that is why i really wanted honest opinion so I could improve . Being bland , that is where i could only express my apologies as I have Put you down there . i will try my best in future to write words that could be more expressive and be easily Understood by Readers .
Ch 25 Selfish Request(giving Lover and Sister true Happiness) Part 3- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to 1234mmCh 8 The Lonely Mother and Scum Friend (Part 8)
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to DivineHyperCh 24 Selfish Request (giving Sister and lover True happiness ) Part 2
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to MonkeTrollCh 23 Story 2.5 Selfish Request ( Giving Sister and Lover true happiness ) Part 1
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to CoolOp
yeah like if you know the place you live in is full of those kind of scumbags , pretty much every place is ,you gotta teach kids right , or else its too late to regret ,kinda hard making sure that lolis understand though :)
Ch 23 Story 2.5 Selfish Request ( Giving Sister and Lover true happiness ) Part 1 - underinmoonlight3yrReplied to Daoist_of_Fatness
Thankyou for The Correction Mr Daoist_of_Fatness , I will try my best removing those holes and errors by next Week
< here mom , i brought this dress for you , why dont you try it > while mom was thinking , i passed her the dress i brought from system , of course it was a lie that i brought as gift - underinmoonlight3yrReplied to CoolOpCh 9 Story 2 : Crazy sister and a broken lover (part 1)
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to DivineHyperCh 20 Crazy Sister and a Broken Lover(part 12)
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to DgdgbjCh 22 Side Story 1 ( Coward Son , helpless mother forced by her Son's bullies)
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to CoolOpCh 21 Crazy Sister and a Broken Lover(Part 13)(end)
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to CoolOp
well i have read them before , but lets be honest , nearly every plot is mostly like no matter how ugly or nasty i am , or a loser i am , i will make you but since i have a big horse dick , i will make you beg for my cum dumpster right ? anyway i would be uploading story similar to those later on , thankyou for Reading
Ch 22 Side Story 1 ( Coward Son , helpless mother forced by her Son's bullies) - underinmoonlight3yrReplied to YmrobbiCh 21 Crazy Sister and a Broken Lover(Part 13)(end)
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to MonkeTrollCh 21 Crazy Sister and a Broken Lover(Part 13)(end)
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to Marcelo_Xavier_3880Ch 12 Epilogue
- underinmoonlight3yrReplied to 1234mmCh 12 Epilogue