ASKeeling

lol I'm glad you worked that out

i would never add a rape scene. especially not a detailed one with visuals. i completely understand your stance. thanks again for the feedback and feel free to engage further

Thank you so much for this comment! It makes writing a story this size more palpable. Please feel free to reach out whenever you have a thought or concern or question. I really do enjoy the back and forth. Just out of curiosity, where did you think the Sheree situation was headed?

Thanks for the comment. I actually have some more of Carnal Cultivation coming soon.

Yes, that was the first time. it didnt happen when he caught her because that wasn't skin to skin

thanks for the catch

The story starts out really intriguing and makes you want to understand why. Then she gets in big trouble and I feel bad for her.Excellent read so far with characters that stand out.

thank you for that wonderful review! my other works are listed on my profile page.

lol thank you for explaining that. I do as well but its later in the story.

Thank you for that encouragement!