Hello! I really like how the story is progressing! However I notice a bit of grammatical errors within the text. I suggest studying a little more about grammar. I too, struggle with the English from time to time. Anyways, I look forward to the story's growth and I wish you the best of luck! :3

hahaha its alright! In fact I appreciate your review, thank you very much! I will keep it in mind when moving forward with the story!