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I think it's best if you show Thea's five years while Oliver is on Lian Yu. Yes, there might not be much to write about until he gets back, but if you want Thea's love interest to be introduced organically instead of feeling forced, you’d need to explore how, why, and where they met. I think those five years are a great opportunity to do that. Also, maybe when the particle accelerator goes off, she could be there for a business-related reason and end up gaining some sort of power.

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How would you even control that?

Take Furiosa from mad max fury road for example.

The only thing that up until now I can complain about is perhaps the names of some things being wrong like for example sylens is named sylas in chapter 3. But overall these thing are easy to overlook. Good job so far Author. Only recommandation I would give is to double check the specific names of places and characters.

This is probably one of the 1st the 100 fanfictions i've read. It's grammer is good better than most. The Character i feel is also depicted really well.

Great chapter!

Your doing a good job my man.

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