DaoistSniper

So far So Original

The story is great and good but I just found it odd how it's different(in a good way of course.) This gives me a feeling of uniqueness when reading a story. Such good book deserves really the no. 47th place at that time. However I guess it's not too late to find some editors or use some grammar check apps. It would really be a great help.

Same here. Also, there's no system!!!

This is quite unique. As he doesn't have a system to help out.

Welp. I guess the author should apply some editor or so (maybe find some grammar apps?) 🤔. This keeps piling up😗

Yeah do you?

This is just last year.

This would really be me if I'd be given that kind of a chance too

Aww. Poor little guy.

This is it.