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But the old story also had a lot happening at the same time. In that story, I really didn't have any planning, unlike this one. There aren't that many things happening in this story. Literally, the protagonist has his house, the clones stay in the dungeon, and they're hunting???? I honestly don't know where that's confusing. There are only a few chapters where Loki's perspective is shown, and she demonstrates interest in the protagonist (clone). There aren't many things happening in the world. Maybe you found that story more fun because it had characters from other anime?
If he doesn't join a Familia, it will become boring. He needs to interact with other Familias. If he just keeps killing monsters and picking fights with other Familias, it can become very repetitive.
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Look at the tags....
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