Dr_Shallot

The MC also doesn't know anyone who can transplant the circuits onto him

I'm sorry man, she isn't my OTP and I dislike harems

She does, but one flaw of the MC is that once he sets a goal or promise for himself, he gets hyperfocused on it and ignores things that may be obvious. One example is his lack of swordsmanship training because he hasn't been humbled by someone with greater skill than him, and he thinks the skills he experiences while tracing are enough

I was thinking about having him do that, but I was concerned since magic circuits are unique to the individual and there would be too great of a risk when it comes to compatibility, because if it backfires the MC will die. There is no coming back from that.

I need some constructive criticism or general comments guys, otherwise I won't know if what I'm writing makes you feel nice when you read it

It's not AI, man. I think that's kind of obvious.

Can you give some constructive criticism then? This is my first story, and I am inexperienced when it comes to writing characters and their lives.

I love it so far. The system aspect is handled very well, and the characters feel like people. Just make sure you have a brain while reading, which may be hard for people on this app, but I'm saying this because things are mentioned earlier that influence current dialogue in the chapters. So don't ask stupid questions and pay attention

What's funny about having a good dad?

Please proofread your work. It's not hard to do