King_doom

So after reading your story till this point I feel like your story has become a hot garbage fire I'm sorry but you had it at the beginning but then you lost it when you got around to this point The story is just not worth my time I hope you have good luck with it in futures but I'm walking away from this Good luck

He didn't even need to do nothing too translucent he would have died just like he did in ATV Show or the comics like that makes no sense he didn't need me to do nothing just let the plot follow the line

I don't get it why go to a safe house he could have just gone to a small island and trained there And why pick on Huey It just makes no sense to me

why

Why do that It makes no sense Don't do that no more

I mean why would he tell his weakness especially to Batman come on that's stupid

Still though why would you tell your weakness they're so stupid

Why would you tell a random stranger your one weakness that makes no sense

I tell myself if the author made the same get a woman pregnant while he was still a kid I would start breeding trash story Well I guess it stops here for me He's still a kid but already a baby on the way that is stupid and trash

I'm just saying this in the future Viola will become a drop dead gorgeous He should go for her