I'm excited to see where this story goes!

Thx for the chapter

This is a Very Interesting story Please don't Drop this

ohhh you were talking about chapter 14 and not 13 my mistake lol

wait so he isn't Zalama's successor? I thought that would makes sense why after his first interaction with the dragon balls that he would have more of a connection to magic- I would like an explanation on your thought process, maybe I can help

with this turn off events this is now the best Magical DBZ novel to date please continue I need more!

Dragon God, Zayn. What a beyond pleasant turn off events, but he yeeted the Earth's dragon balls before the start of DBZ won't that cause Goku to be Perma dead if he gets packed up by piccolo?

i feel like nimbus should be several times faster than Goku's mini nimbus since Zayn now bonded with the true whole nimbus. like logically his nimbus should be way stronger 💪

W Chapter!

idk if you like the idea but I feel like out of every character in classic DBZ that deserves development it's Low-key Yajirobe because I feel like he is wasted potential, like bro could have been a cold swordsman able to take down op aliens as a human

Yet again amazing chapter! Loving the direction of the story so far Dbz in general leans away from the magical aspect of ki. So I am very interested in the future of Zayn as a Magic sensitive human in DBZ. I hope there will be a lot more magic phenomenon in the future. It's a unique progression instead of classic training to force BP (battle power) gain. Magic has a lot of potential like for example the massive amp Vegeta got for Majin mark - though I hope such increases won't be so evil In nature lol. Again W Chapter!

This story by far is the best dbz novel I've read so far in any platform, it actually feels like a dragon ball story like something very close to existing in Canon. Also the Mc is a very likable character with a interesting personality and skillset, all of the character interactions feel natural and flow very well with the story's pacing. I would love to read more and hope this will be a long story because I will read all of it! Overall amazing work!!