Mr_Kuzan

Man this FF is getting better and better each chapter. Please keep the good work..

I have high expectations for this FF. Please keep the good work.

Best fanfic so far. Does not feel like a fanfic at all. This feels like al alternate universe worth manga or anime adaptation. However too much darkness for my liking but Naruto world it's build on darkness so. Enjoy a good read...

Yeah the system was right... Not creative at all. Now it all starts..

Just pure cinema. Author please do not drop this fanfic!

I see potencial for a great fanfic. Keep the good work author!

A hard and unique view of Naruto world. Very interesting fanfic and with good character development. You will cheer for the mc to surpass and improved himself

An original One Piece fanfiction bro. Good character development[img=recommend]

Keep the good work boss!

Chapter 17 and it looks good to me. First, skipping 1, 2 and 3 book and starting with the 4 book is a good decision. Second, Harry putting efford into magic is definitely more realisting than even the books. Finally, the only thing that I would like to note is the writing format that I not familiar other than the usual quotation marks for character dialogues.