Impressive plot creates curiosity to know what's gonna happen next. Great start for a first time writer. Waiting for the next chapter and see how the story builds up.

The plot seems pretty interesting and creates curiosity to know what's gonna happen next. Great going. Waiting for next Chapter.

Really [img=update]Great story. The plot is really awesome. It brings back several memories.Excited to know what's gonna happen next how things are gonna turn out.