Niyuniyu
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"Holy… cum?" Alpheus tilted his head. "I never heard that, Sir."- Niyuniyu1yrPosted
In the beginning i feelt like I heard my daughter telling me about a great anime .... you know that feeling when someone is telling you , he was jumping there and almost get killed but he was more clever and did that and that .... you will feel really curious and want to see more. That's what made me feel this chapter. Still ,I wish I can see more dialog between people in the future chapters. I will keep reading. You are great ,keep it up .
- Niyuniyu1yrPosted
The plot story is great. It made me confused sometimes because I don't know much about magic and magic people but it was intriguing me many times. At chapter 6 in the beginning I was confused about who is talking but reading it again I figured out . You made the bad people have some harsh time behind them and instead of hating them for making so much bad deeds I somehow finished by feeling bad for them . For example Samantha and Nicolas... they were using the magical creatures and hurt them but when Nicolas got killed I felt sorry for him, Same with Samantha , when she sow Nicolas dieing I felt sorry for her. All in one , you made your story catch life from the first word till the last . keep it up . Congratulations.
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I am rejecting the ideea of believing that this 2 are humans .
"Go and find Samantha and kill her too, in the meanwhile I will try and relay the information to the inquisitor Ivan" I further added. - Niyuniyu1yrCommented
you should take care , I don't really feel comfortable with this prince . it's giving me a bad feeling
He could have found that information anywhere, he could have asked one of the spies he has planted here, but he still asked me as a sign of good faith, so I decided to answer his question. - Niyuniyu1yrCommented
crazy ..
" Let's just say, he died gloriously in the upcoming battle" Ivan further added. - Niyuniyu1yrCommented
oh ,isn't a dragon either 😅😅😅. I'm dead ...
The basic difference between a dragon and a drake was their height, the shape of their wings, and their scales. - Niyuniyu1yrCommented
oh ,it's a dragon 😍
Subsequently waking up after the whole ordeal, I tried to use one of my innate healing abilities, concentrating all the mana in the surroundings towards my silver-colored core, I tried to construct a regenerative fire, but alas nothing happened. - Niyuniyu1yrCommented
what ???is Drake a vampire or something like that?😳😳😳😳
I used my long black talons to shred my prey's wings with a single slash. The victim's back got covered with blood and feeling the pain he was in, I bit his neck, giving him a quick death. - Niyuniyu1yrCommented
what do you mean silence? killing ???? Are you killing your own people?
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I was stunned too ,for a sec 😳
"Y-You have a guardian?" I was stunned, I knew him for more than 7 years, and never did he previously mention anything of that sought. - Niyuniyu1yrCommented
gosh 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. Calm down 😅😅😅
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Keeping my urges onto myself, I sat down on the ground and started thinking of the various methods I could use to wake her up. - Niyuniyu1yrPosted
If in first chapters I thought this story is not so good after he meets Luna and they reach the saints realm the story is changing, the writhing is like "catching life " . I could feel every word ,I'm like I need to see what happens next . Please don't die ,please don't give up . I could see Luna's worries. The way the story is written from that point make me think that this stori is written by an expert
This book has been deleted. - Niyuniyu1yrCommentedCh 13 ~Change Is Okay~