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Dan20231yrCommentedSorry but your rankings are wayyy offf
91-99: Title Douluo - 200,000-1,000,000 Years- Dan20231yrCommented
Author no offense but I feel like you are making the same mistakes as you did in the last fic. I believe you should flesh out his first world more before we go onto another as it is his main world(starting point). And the fact that we don’t have a clear understanding of the plot besides are knowledge.P.S you might want to shorten the status panel as it cover a huge part of the ch also take to story slower bulid it up more. You are most likely going to run into the same issues like you did in the last fic.
Ch 12 Chapter - 9 - Dan20231yrCommented
So basically a white hole
[Void Nova: The ability to release a massive burst of void energy that can vaporize everything in its path.] - Dan20231yrCommented
This is just getting stupid at this point author. I mean it is just repetition where one of the Z fighters gets stronger than cell than cell absorbs a Z fighter and becomes stronger than the Z figther. or cell is suddenly out matched but then he pulls a card out of no where and surprises everyone and then absorbs an android honestly the minute. You kept power levels after the frieza saga is when this whole story just went downhill that and you keep denying the fact zenkais exist once you turn ssj. I mean it just feels like a worse dbz plot in which your picking and choosing which elements of the story stay.
Ch 92 Chapter 92: K.O. - Dan20231yrCommented
You haven’t have not even read or watch bleach author all you probably did was look clips on YouTube about it and know nothing as if you were just a basic fan you would realize that it is isshin’s shinagmi powers that are countering her hallow powers while Quincy do not have an effect powers as they do not have a restance against hallow.
They didn't know that Masaki was once a Quincy who was bitten by an artificial hollow made by Aizen that can turn Shinigami into hollows after they were bitten, but unfortunately, Quincy and hollows are like Fire and Water, they can't combine and always destroy the other with their spiritual energy. - Dan20231yrReplied to Gareth_1519
Also yeah King David actually existed and the were able to trace blood back to house of David
Crucifixion. - Dan20231yrReplied to
It should be I your history books it goes into details about how 3-5 Jews were killed every day. As the Romes did not like the Jewish religion as it only had one god which was surperme and which was why when some one was found to be Jewish they were treated as a heretic.
Crucifixion. - Dan20231yrReplied to Gareth_1519
Umm fun fact did you know upwards to 300,000 Jews died during crufixation tge crucified 3-5 Jews every day and burned down the second temple fyi this is all historical true and also fun fact king David was a real person in history
Crucifixion. - Dan20231yrReplied to Jade_beauty
Could probably find more in a highschool bathroom
I robbed a minimum of 5 drug dealers this night and had some decent amount of $721, this business sure makes a lot of money. I also got some information about a fight club which was not too far away from the place where I am at. - Dan20231yrReplied to AbyssalSora
Nope over time is correct
but with how Sora was some, slowly even those who just wanted to use Sora began to see Sora as some time of elder brother who just wanted to make his little brother happy. the past few days, Sora had already made all of them have this idea deep down, and over time Sora only added the firewood to make this idea grow. - Dan20231yrReplied to ssdxdCh 7 Chapter 7
- Dan20231yrReplied to _GoldenKing_
Umm I don’t think we watched the same show then as aizen goals and Motives were explored pretty well and heck he even got a back story too
Aizen is really a misfit after all, that aside, I really fear sorry for the people who are gonna oppose this Duo from now on... Also, Harribel is not far. - Dan20231yrCommented
Kinto un
"Ja.. I'm thinking I make a little bang. Isn't that great? You get to be entertained." Roman smiled calmly, raising a hand to the front and clenching his fist, "Fall." - Dan20231yrCommented
Fate style, better hope no old man is their to stop her
That made Rumi regret and greatly enraged when she first learned about it. In frustration that was directed at nobody in particular, she was almost about to use her authority as a [Moon Bunny] to clash the Moon with Earth. - Dan20231yrCommented"Neat, I guess?" He chuckled while thinking of Vampire Progenitor's overall abilities. It mainly focused on Blood Manipulation, but he also could summon familiars.
- Dan20231yrReplied to javi299
Dragon bone extending staff from god of highschool wepon of jin mori the protag
Huo Yuhao slowly grasped the handle and felt the comfortable texture grazing his palm. If Yeoui is a prideful weapon, Star Quaking Saber is like a newborn to him. - Dan20231yrCommented
Funny you say that gmos plants atleast have been tested to have no side effect short or long term yet Are still protested in Europe by 2 major groups forgot which ones tho
There were large scale protests about using artificially modified crops and farm animals but since there were no side effects and it was proven to be as healthy as the organic ones, they were shut down. - Dan20231yrCommented"Interesting, come." Qianye Ying'er entered a stance.
- Dan20231yrReplied to Blankio
Is because his mother had the ablity to suck magic out of someone which if eventually the reason that asta was born without magic
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