I am confused. Can you give me some examples? Sorry. I suck at this. But, Ill keep trying! Thank you!

Indeed I was thinking along those lines but I wanted to truly portray the thought of "What if the world is faced with unprecedented crisis? Where everyone experiences true fear? Its basically working on natural human instinct to group up." But ... I felt like it was really hard to portray. Thank you, your comments really help.

Thank you ... and yes , I am still trying to learn the usage of punctuation marks in stories. Thank you once again, I really appreciate it.

Yes ... as you noticed I made Dr. Estes the type to be cool headed character. I'm doing my best to give the feeling that"Ah this guy is a scientist but human at the same time". Its probably because of how I want a scientist to be. But I will take note of that. Ill surely be mindful about it :) Thank you so much, Your comment makes me happy :)

Oh thank you. In the later part of the stories I tried removing the "it was" it does become weird and annoyingly long. really, thank you!!

I made it that obvious huh ahahah. This is my first story but I do hope you're enjoying it. Although, I kinda diverge from the path but you're not that far.

hahahah dun mind it xD

Take care. I'll be waiting for newer chapters :)

Ah sorry, I did not notice the last update of the chapter. Are there more? When will you release the next one?

I've always been a fan of stories like this. Your writing is great! You update too! My problems are the characters in the story. I can't seem to grasp their personality at the moment. But I've also read novels where characters are like that, they become solid and powerful figures in the later parts. And I wish to see this novel grow like that. You just earned another reader ^^. I wish I was as good and consistent as you.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Spoiler Ahead<<<<<<<<<< . . . . . As promised here are the dates. If I forgot something, you can point it out. 39 years ago March 15 - 20, 2024 - The 6 days of night. March 21 2024 - The 7th night / The Rain of Blood, Hail and Fire/Lucifer's attack April 22, 2024 - Island Prison 2nd conference. Lucifer vs Jibril.

Uhm hello its me the author of the story "Into Ruins". I'll be frank, I don't really think my story is that great but if there are people who will enjoy this. That is more than enough reason for me to continue doing this. For all those readers who spent time reading this. Thank you. I really appreciate it.

Yes that was my goal. Making it confusing then slowly connect everything. I hope you really enjoyed it :D And thank you.

Yep. Although, you need to work on your grammar. The good thing was you managed to sponge out the necessary emotions that a reader should feel :D Well, at least for me I wont be able to do that. T_T

IN SHORT I ALMOST TEARED UP! XD

Hi guys, its me the author of this short story. This story is not done yet, I still need to clean it up and rephrase a lot of things but this is the gist of it.

I was just doing my job XD

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In the first place, who would not want a close combat marksman! This feels like im reading a japanese vrmmo + cultivation stories. Yes keep it up.

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