Why do they always use these types of lines when they play this character? I don't see any sense

No dejes de escribir porfa, te está quedando súper bien

Men, no has visto los capítulos que subes? Solo son un párrafo corto, pensé que era accidental, pero ahora no se si es accidente o aproposito

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Mamá Mia no era nivel 6?

Nekoshou

You should stop doing this type of voting or stop asking for stones, you are going to start irritating people and they will stop seeing your story, believe me I have seen several people who do the same and it is not going well for them, it is better to continue publishing chapters normally, although of course, I am only giving you a suggestion, you will see what you do.

Man, the story was going great, but you totally screwed up, I'll leave it.

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Add Bea

I don't know if it's normal since I'm also a novice at this, but don't be mortified that you're just learning, I'm just telling you to make the chapters longer because I don't think many people like such short chapters, I'm not telling you either that you make 10,000 words, just start with 1,000 and over time you will increase it little by little.

Not that I can help you much, but I also write fanfics from time to time and first I write it in my native language in word and then I translate it into English with the help of google.

Friend, I like the story, but try to make the longer chapters so you have fewer chapters, I say it seems that each chapter does not have 500 words (I did not tell them), I only ask you that, I see everything normal for the rest

You should separate the parts where the characters speak so that it is read well

Where can I see it in full?

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Ok, but can't get it later? That is, they give it to him as a reward for doing or discovering something, it would be great if he also kept the Riolu

Why not let him keep the Riolu too as an extra reward or compensation from the mayor or something?

Can you upload it on Scribble hub? It's a good page