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KazuyaVermillion

KazuyaVermillion

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2020-09-29 JoinedMyanmar (Burma)
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to KazuyaVermillion

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    Ch 28 Weapons hall
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Commented

    exp

    Ch 28 Weapons hall
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Commented

    the fk

    Peter held a small round solid lump of mud in his hand. As he moved his hands, he was able to change the shape of the mud. He turned it from a ball into a long staff. Then back into a ball again.
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Commented

    I thought for a sec she is quite smart before.

    "Please," Layla said as if she was begging him. "It's a childhood dream of mine, this type of things only happens in books or fairy tales and now I have the chance for it to happen right now." She said with her eyes lit up.
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    My Vampire System
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Commented

    lol

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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Commented

    hoho, sound interesting

    Ch 5 No Ability
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    My Vampire System
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to KazuyaVermillion

    ep

    Ch 1 Just an old Book
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    My Vampire System
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    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Commented

    exp

    Ch 1 Just an old Book
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    My Vampire System
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Edward98

    Thanks for review! You are right. This is my first time writing. So i know there are many mistakes. Thanks for your corrections and advices. I really appreciate. I will edit and be more careful in next chapters. Also, I will read more books to improve my writing. Thanks again😇

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    The Throne Of God
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Edward98

    Yes, you are right. To say the truth, I also thought about it as you. But although it makes unrealistic, it can be easily remembered. Thanks for advice! I will think about it and edit it again in future.

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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Edward98

    Yes, he is that kind of person but his personality will improve later.

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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Edward98

    Yes, yours is better I will edit it

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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to KazuyaVermillion

    I really appreciate I will correct little by little and will be more careful in next episodes.

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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Edward98

    ah sry. my bad i was so eager to write. thanks for correction.

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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Bloodthirsty09

    thanks I am trying to upload more chas

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    The Sinful Life of The Emperor
    Magical Realism · True_Seeker
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to xEnvy

    Hi! I am a new author. I am not promoting my story. I just want some review or your opinion upon my story. So please can you spare some time to read my novel. I am trying my best to create a good one. Thanks for your time. Title is the throne of god. it has only 7 cha for now. I will upload 1 cha per day. Thanks again.

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    Guild Wars
    Video Games · Kotario
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Tekbox

    Hi! I am a new author. I am not promoting my story. I just want some review or your opinion upon my story. So please can you spare some time to read my novel. I am trying my best to create a good one. Thanks for your time. Title is the throne of god. it has only 7 cha for now. I will upload 1 cha per day. Thanks again.

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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Transhumanist

    Hi! I am a new author. I am not promoting my story. I just want some review or your opinion upon my story. So please can you spare some time to read my novel. I am trying my best to create a good one. Thanks for your time. Title is the throne of god. it has only 7 cha for now. I will upload 1 cha per day. Thanks again.

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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern Fantasy · Stardust_Breaker
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Syam_Sundar_7103

    yes, and not only range but also melee. The main point of this story is plot and adventure.

    Ch 1 Old man Jim
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  • KazuyaVermillion
    KazuyaVermillion3mth
    Replied to Syam_Sundar_7103

    It contains ki and something similar to cultivation power but no.

    Ch 1 Old man Jim
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    The Throne Of God
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