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The story is decently written the first 30 chapters are okay nothing much majorly happens you know you meet the characters but I'm sorry you picked the smart atoms from invincible and the Baki bloodline and no you saying it's not the full effect doesn't really help much and then let's not get started on the cucking. its just it's a real shame but I'm sure some people will get enjoyment of it

This is so great

A great chapter and I can't wait for more

Read this story it's great beautifully written and has some great moments if you like a smart strong protagonist this is it held the emperor

I just want to say by god damn loved this story so much thank you

It really do enjoy the story for what it, is it feels like a fun read nothing that's gonna blow you away but it's quite enjoyable I don't know how far it will go but for the 20 something chapters plus I read I really enjoy it and I feel like if you'd like these types of stories you're enjoy it too

I ain't gonna lie that felt like a huge let down

I would not recommend reading this story as of chapter 25 it feels just bland a bit boring and nothing really happens this doesn't happen in the original story if you're looking for something new and exciting this is not it. Even though this says it's a SI it's not really apart from that the writing and spellings pretty on point no complaints there.

The story is very fun the translation can be a bit funky sometimes but apart from that it's a very fun read I think if you want a story about a steady growth of power it feels very natural I'd say give it a go it's worth it in my opinion. this opinion was based on 44 chapters deep as that's how many there was at the time

Very good so far the first 20 chapters are a joy to read and I can't wait for more if you want my opinion this is definitely worth a read hopefully the author continues this trend.