Fab chapter. I love Heaven and who she is becoming

Aww happy for them to be back together

I've never known spelling and grammar so bad. It is so frustrating to constantly try to read over the mistakes. I'm not sure who does the proof reading for it.

I'm so intrigued by this story . Waiting for chapters is getting more and more frustrating

Good theory !

This could be very interesting to see how the story if Irene pans out. I think Rishan and Klara may have something going on too.

This could be very interesting to see how the story if Irene pans out. I think Rishan and Klara may have something going on too.

Same . Drives me crazy !!

True

I agree with this

I am starting to like klara

What has happened to Irene ? Who is Irene ?

So far so good................................ ......... . . . . . . Not sure if it is the type of story I could continue to read but it was a nice starter

Im not sure she can be trusted

So intrigued with this story. Hate waiting for more

Very short chapter!

Ooh this could be interesting

Argh so frustrating. Wish I could read on quicker

I hope he doesn't marry klara

So intrigued with this story. Hate waiting for more