Ayoub_Idsmaine

Great story but bad writing that needs a rewrite especially the earlier chapters

its really good after 80 chapters, and it has big potential but the MC doesn't use even 10% of his abilities like, if he doesn't use them, why give him in the first place .

who thinks Yue Songlie is the most useless lover he has ? she 's like leech taking without giving nothing , maybe her physique will serve WW in his cultivation later i hope .

TRUE , it was fun when they were just six or eight and he wasen't so simp but now he is just collecting them like pokemons and most of them are completely useless . Anyway , thanks for your amazing story . and Cheers for the most underated and amazing women SU MEI HIS LIGHT Ps: Su mei is the only women that have the qualification to be his equal , all the others are just pastime beside Xue yifei

This story is a masterpiece of originality and a master of this type of story's , first , the writing quality is good but not exceptionnal , still lacks a bit of description in fights (by this i mean that you should write the fight not about the fight , example : jason droped a kick on the left side of ragnar'chest , while barely dodging the fire beam from the right with a backfilp ). the stability of updates is really good if i take the exceptionnnal quality of the story in account , there is nothing to say about story development if i have to describe it unpredictable , intriguing and well thought out , The characters are multi-dimensional and realistic, each with their own motivations and complexities , the world background is just ENORMOUS like i have no idea how you will manage it in the future but good luck . This story needs more recognition that may not come from this website unfortunately , your story is like a diamond hidden in an ocean of garbage i may advice you to try publishing this story in other websites (like royal road , scribble ) but iknow the same problem still exist there , Anyway , author you should be proud of what you created here , a gem in the making that we all feel the you gave to , and we thank you as readers for the oppurtunity of discovering your world [img=recommend] Good Luck and Take care

A masterpiece in the making , perfect intrigue ,worldbuilding , unique MC , i just can't get enough of this masterpiece. Thanks you author for this masterpiece.

Hello, I just want to thank the author for this masterpiece , believe me when I tell you, this novel have the potential to be in the top 10 seriously , the characters have well constructed background story's , the system is totally original and fair for all the characters , and the protagonist is so well built that it make him almost real. but it's just my personal opinion and it's in no case a critic . personally , I don't know why but Nicole's character is so much hateful hh , Nicole is like a leech to kairos that suck his being and his individuality , but also she is more like a sakura but op more than the main character and have a serious case of psychlove(yandere) lol . I know that is the goal of the author in making her and I feel like in the future there will be a plot twist where kairos will have to fight Nicole to get his liberty, and there Nicole will became the main antagonist and her goal will be to acquire kairos like an object. sorry it's just my theories so don't take it seriously .ahhh I thank the author from my heart for this work and I wish him good luck in his career😁😁😁.

pls i want him to ignore those 3 and go to the next floor