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The Mask On My Face Is Just To Hide The Monster Inside
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Alad1yrCommentedplease, please stop. eveofchaos is simply bad at this, he is just bad. at least try to research about the genre a bit before incorporating it into your novel. i hope it gets better as we go, it's just unbearable now.
June happily followed Noah after she heard his words, she simply liked his honesty too much.- Alad1yrPosted
exceptional world building, clean writing style, fair plot and character development are some of this work's positive qualities. the author doesn't spare any effort in getting into details about the world building, there's some info dump at first but he starts to slowly feed the information to us later on, in a way we can digest. the writing quality is clean, with barely any grammatical mistakes and not many typos. both the plot and characters start out vague but get progressively deeper and more complex as the story goes on. the story is mainly focused on cultivation and it does an excellent job at it. all in all i love this work, but it isn't without its flaws. the biggest one that I've noticed as of now(350chs) is filler. there's filler at virtually every single chapter, and the short length of each chapter doesn't help with it at all. sometimes we get into random and redundant subjects that have nothing to do with the story, and are quite frankly, irrelevant. the author probably adapted this writing style in order to increase the release rate, which is understandable considering he wants to make money, but i feel like he's taken it too far, to the point of actually integrating this negative factor into the story. if you filtered out all the filler, i reckon that the story would be wrapped up within 1000-1500 chapters which is... fucked up considering you're reading a total of hundreds of chapters of filler. anyway, that's it for my review, all in all i still love it and it deserves a solid 8/10. however, everything considered, i am still at ch350 and my opinion is subject to change, hopefully a more positive one.
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bro💀💀
Just a few minutes had to pass before Noah was bought in the main hall of the building where Lisa, Leo, Luke, and Logan were waiting for him. - Alad1yrCommented
ah yes, intercourse.
She accepted his kiss and replied with one of her own, the two of them then laid themselves on the floor, uncaring of the fact that there was no mat, to continue with their soft effusions. - Alad1yrCommented
lol what a goofy line
"Let's just make the best out of the time that we have left, let's leave the sorrow for when you are gone." - Alad1yrCommented
to anyone who may have read up to this point, I'm dropping it. you see every plot has its lows and highs, usually after a lot of filler(especially this much, it's been what, 50 chapters now?) the plot reaches its high. but now i realize this wasn't a setup nor filler, this was the actual content of the story, which, in fact, is plot repetition. the same scenarios have played out in the past 500 chapters God knows how many times and i thought the author was gonna come up with something new now, but just like any xianxia story, there has to be plot repetition. I'm assuming the author's gonna keep repeating this plot until the story ends and frankly speaking i see no point in reading any further considering that the story is more plot-fuocused rather cultivation-focused. enjoyed the ride so far, now it's come to and end. that's all, see ya.
Ch 37 560 - A knot in the heart - Alad1yrCommented
very good question, patriarch Xue Wuyue. as it appears, the author can downgrade Zhou Fan's IQ on a whim to pump one filler chapter after another. this entire demon scheming sect arc, from the first chapter to this point has been all but filler.
He said, "I don't know what you're doing, other than cultivating yourself and setting up a few formations here, I don't know what you're up to. Zhuo Fan, where is your old energy from the Luo family, why are you so passive when you come under this clan and don't do your work all day long?" - Alad1yrCommented
oh what a demonic magic emperor, since when did he become so benevolent, so forgiving and magnanimous? he has more than enough reason to kill them yet he suddenly feels like a saint.
"Go back, I told you that you are not my opponent, don't try in vain!" Looking at the two people's astonished faces, Zhuo Fan did not feel a light laugh and casually waved his hand. - Alad1yrCommented
god here should stand for soul
But it was Zhuo Fan who was meditating and cultivating here, refining his god and refining his body! - Alad1yrCommented
that's right, even the patriarch dares not to offend Zhou Fan, as for you? Hmph, are you above even the patriarch? seeking death!
What kind of divinity was this Zhuo Fan that even the Patriarch did not dare to touch him at will? Although this is a small matter, but with the temper of the patriarch ... - Alad1yrCommented
humph, seeking death!
There was a murderous aura! - Alad1yrCommented
rushing for reincarnation!
But at this moment, another delicate cry was resounding in the air, "How dare you, who is bullying my sister ..." - Alad1yrCommented
sigma all the way, slap the thot away
"Yes, I'm in the servant's room!" Zhuo Fan laughed shyly, not taking it personally at all. - Alad1yrCommented
DeepL has no chill.
However, Zhuo Fan shook his head and laughed out loud, "It's nothing, I was just sighing, these two people are really fucking talented. It's a pity that they're not reused by the clan!" - Alad1yrCommented
yuan shen should be soul power
The Yuan Shen impacted, but this Yuan Shen power of his was extremely domineering, it should be related to the gong method. It seemed that he had used some kind of evil technique to refine his Yuan Shen to be so overpowering. - Alad1yrCommented
this is an ad that got through while translating, i think. don't pay it any mind, you'll see it often.
The company's main business is to provide a wide range of products and services to the public. - Alad1yrReplied to Zarackkk