hellooo im just a guy who likes writing a lot, so i decided to create my own story! i like music and i dont like math *too* much thanks for reading!
Thank you so much! This review was fascinating to read on its own, and reading it brought a smile to my face. I'll try the absolute best that I can, so thank you. :)
I like the mix of genres! Superpowers and System are practically the same thing, but mix in a little bit of military in there makes it interesting. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but that can easily be improved! The character designs are nice, and the world-building is the best part of it. I haven't read all of the chapters yet, but overall I'm giving it a 4.6. Good luck, author! This looks promising!