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Vixenhunts

Vixenhunts

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2020-09-25 JoinedUnited States
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  • Vixenhunts
    Vixenhunts2yr
    Replied to TheLostSupreme

    I don't take any offense, in fact, I really like advice like this.

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  • Vixenhunts
    Vixenhunts2yr
    Replied to TheLostSupreme

    This comment has me watching Youtube videos of sentence structures. Thank you!

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  • Vixenhunts
    Vixenhunts2yr
    Replied to TheLostSupreme

    Thank you for the feedback! Also, you have given me some ideas in terms of worldbuilding and character design so I'd like to that you for that as well.

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  • Vixenhunts
    Vixenhunts2yr
    Replied to TheLostSupreme

    I'll keep this in mind. I just wanted to do this scene because it was stuck in my mind for a while. There won't be much face slapping in the near future.

    Ch 2 Meeting An Demonic Cultivator
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  • Vixenhunts
    Vixenhunts2yr
    Replied to LuckyStrawberry

    I did think I was going too fast so I'll be sure to slow it down from here on out. Thanks for the feedback!

    Ch 2 Meeting An Demonic Cultivator
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  • Vixenhunts
    Vixenhunts2yr
    Commented

    Ruined it already. It's still probably a good book but not for someone like me who prefers non-human systems.

    "So what if I am young? Do you want to fight," the girl said, while gritting her teeth—if she had any.
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    I Sell Fate Through A System
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  • Vixenhunts
    Vixenhunts2yr
    Commented

    Good first chapter. Excellent sentence structures.

    Ch 1 A Good Day to Die
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  • Vixenhunts
    Vixenhunts2yr
    Commented

    We just started and the Protag is already naked[img=recommend]

    Atop an inconspicuous cliff, a male youth with long black hair squatted, unperturbed by anything. He left his hair free-flowing, covering his whole body as if he wore an ankle-length dress. He hid his face behind curtains of hair, only occasionally, did a slender arm poke out. Thus, if one didn't look closely, they wouldn't even realize the youth was naked.
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