Celnius

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Celnius4 years ago
Replied to Leandro_Sepulveda
probably from "Man of the house"
"Good..." Walking over to a small wooden box, Christian opens it and takes out passports and IDs "Emily will be Liam, Lust will be Noah and Leslie will be called Ava, while I'll be Abigail."
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Celnius4 years ago
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is this a reference?
"Good..." Walking over to a small wooden box, Christian opens it and takes out passports and IDs "Emily will be Liam, Lust will be Noah and Leslie will be called Ava, while I'll be Abigail."
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Celnius4 years ago
Replied to Phlofi
aplico ante la duda
"Lo siento, Shizuka-chan, Chifuyu-san" - dijo Cloud con una sonrisa mientras las pupilas de Rintarou se contraían - "¿Cómo?"
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Anime & Comics · GenoXX
Celnius4 years ago
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Anime & Comics · GenoXX
Celnius5 years ago
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The bread shit happened to me again, I'm seriously thinking of burning that damn bakery.
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Celnius5 years ago
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"Y-You think I'm cute?" Rainey averted her gaze. The way she bit her bottom lip provocatively was so, so wrong. "Do you want to do it here? No one will disturb us."
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Urban · Nneeil
Celnius5 years ago
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this is not potential, it's amazing! 24 caps and i want more! good job! i can tell you that even if this novel is not popular you can already consider it a success for you as a writer
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Celnius5 years ago
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it's okay, and they are very interesting, so don't worry
I'm sorry that the first chapters are so slow, I think I made a mistake by wanting to explain everything so thoroughly, so from chapter 35 o 40, I will start to explain everything quickly and giving small jumps of history to the important parts, at the same time I will give only the right details of the events. But now the chapters are already written, I will dedicate myself to give at least a small explanation of the world in general, which will be in the next chapter that I will also upload today in a few more minutes. Even so, I will try to give logic to everything in the world, I find it quite strange that details come out in the novels without any logic whatsoever.
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Celnius5 years ago
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i agree with the progress of the personality
Well, I've had some complaints about the childish personality of the protagonist, so I've decided to put the warning from this chapter on. Yes, the protagonist will have a changing personality in the first few chapters, at times he will be quite aggressive, while at others he will be quite spoiled, he will even have kuudere moments. But all this will be the first chapters, approximately for chapter 30 to 35, it will be given to understand why, and at the same time, he will have the first personality evolution (something that will happen 3 or 4 times as he grows up). As I already said in chapter 13, there are several factors why his personality is so childish, when our protagonist used to be an "adult" in his other life, but to avoid spoilers, I'll leave it unanswered. If you want an OP character from day one, sorry, my idea is not that, as I focus on character development more than anything else. If you want to read this novel, and you don't have patience for such cases, start reading when chapter 40 is already published, as at that point should be your first step towards mental maturity. Thank you for taking the time to read this. I'm sorry I didn't warn you about this sooner, but always consider the protagonist's personality something to work on. I find it completely stupid for a protagonist to change their personality from one second to the next because of little things like being kicked out of their home or something like that. The human psyche doesn't change that easily, including children, and as I said before, no one is born 'OP'.
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Celnius5 years ago
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lo siento, esto es español. en las personas el habla y la escritura son skills completamente diferentes por eso al aprender un idioma nuevo se divide en hablar, escribir y escucha, y es por eso que los sordos pueden leer y escribir, pero no hablar
Well... maybe saying perfect is an exaggeration, since I can't speak the language, I just understand it and can read it without any problems.
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