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Susie_Carvalho1mthCommentedCh 320 Tomorrow We Fight- Susie_Carvalho3mthCommented
"He just go be outside." The sentence isn't complete. What did you mean to write?
He just go be outside. Stay around the tree to make sure she was safe, but be out and breathing the Thana air and look at the stars. That was all. He just needed to give his body a break, and then he'd come back up and be there for her when she woke up in the morning. - Susie_Carvalho4mthCommented
"I can _Xar when we're back and I'm fully healed". It feels like theres's a word missing in between. The sentence doesn't flow
"I don't know," Zev said. "I need to heal before I face Xar, but I also don't want to fight any more of the if it isn't necessary. I don't want to give them a lot of time to change their minds. I say we move ahead with the ritual—the day after tomorrow. Once that's done and we've had our solitude, I can Xar when we're back and I'll be fully healed." His ribs screamed every time he moved, but he knew within two days that would be an ache, and two days after that he'd be good as new. - Susie_Carvalho4mthCommentedCh 67 Shenanigans
- Susie_Carvalho5mthReplied to Margaret_MasonCh 25 Smell So Good
- Susie_Carvalho7mthCommentedCh 262 [Bonus chapter] NEXT GEN: Mated
- Susie_Carvalho8mthCommented
I disagree about El feeling like she didn't take full responsibility. I also didn't like that they left the giant elephant in the room and didn't address him going behind her back and putting both himself and the kingdom at risk. It may have been well intentioned, but was very poorly thought out. I know that despite being a little prudish with nudity that El is very sexual and I also realize that they agreed to never let outside circumstances get in the way of the relationship. But still, I wouldn't be able to be angry and intimate at the same time. I would have to get things off my chest first, but again... that's me.
Ch 230 What Forever Means – Part 2* - Susie_Carvalho11mthCommented
Amora was the mother figure for Elia, and then Elia stepped into that role for everyone. Suhle is also a gentle soul who has emerged into her strength through maturity. I love that she's stepping into the role of mother figure for Harth, and maybe everyone else too
Ch 74 A Friend Among Wolves - Susie_Carvalho11mthCommentedCh 74 A Friend Among Wolves
- Susie_Carvalho11mthReplied to AimeeLynnCh 64 Always, Together or Apart
- Susie_Carvalho11mthReplied to AimeeLynnCh 12 Faster than Sight
- Susie_Carvalho11mthCommentedCh 15 War Chief
- Susie_Carvalho11mthCommentedCh 12 Faster than Sight
- Susie_Carvalho1yrReplied to Susie_CarvalhoCh 628 A Conversation with Reth - Part 1
- Susie_Carvalho1yrCommentedCh 487 Dead Air