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TheAtheist1dCommentedThis is Hype AF
Even BlackVelvet on stage was excited as he played and jumped around.- TheAtheist6dCommented
I don't think such ambitious projects are really necessary in a novel about music industry. It somewhat ruins the Immersion.
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Wow, even I would be jealous if my girlfriend listened to this. My sincere condolences to the future chapter boyfriends.
(NunuNote: If you want to hear the song in the version I'm planning for Noah to sing, you can go on Discord and find the song in the Noah Songs tab or search for "Dove Cameron - Boyfriend┃Cover by Gun Boi Kaz" on YouTube). - TheAtheist8dCommented
Ayooooooo??!!!
"Yeah, I want to know how it feels to be dominated by those muscles" - TheAtheist20dReplied to The_cow
In The End - Linkin Park
Hearing this first verse of the song sung in a rap style, Charlie was surprised that BlackVelvet sang it well! It was clear that he didn't have much experience, but from the feel of how he was singing the song and how this rap wasn't too difficult, he was delivering it very well! - TheAtheist20dCommented
Nice Development. I'm glad there isn't any weird sexual tension.
Even though Olivia was very beautiful, I think because I took on Noah's body, which had grown up with her always being his little sister, I couldn't even look at her with any sexual tension. Of course, I could tell that she was very pretty, but I didn't feel like looking at her ass while she did her squats. This was something that I realized she probably noticed too, since at first she was a little embarrassed to do squats next to me, but after realizing that I was just focusing on my training and sometimes looking at her just to check if she was doing the exercise correctly, she began to squat more carefree and focused more on the exercises, doing the workout correctly even if she was in a more suggestive position at times. - TheAtheist24dCommented
They really think highly of themselves😐
Meanwhile, Laurence prepared his runes just in case a conflict broke out in an instant. Opheus and Quill met each other's gaze, irritated, not because of their requested presence, but because of what was about to happen between the women and whoever dared to exercise authority on Heaven's Grasp. - TheAtheist1mthCommented
She Died huh?!
"LUNA NO!!" - TheAtheist6mthReplied to THOTSLAYER
That's what being passionate gets you.
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Yo, Look who's here.What are you doing here man?Enjoying life?Haven't had the chance to enjoy your novel recently, I think I left it at chapter 115.Life's been hard, but gotta continue to see what happened.
"Because the Treat Kingdom saved you, you will have to sign the contract. If you don't sign it, the Treat Kingdom will return you to wherever you were before we saved you." - TheAtheist7mthCommented
Bro is stuttering while typing.
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Bro what is happening?!!
"Be strong. Strong enough that you don't have regrets like me. Strong enough that you aren't forced to choose a sacrifice. Strong enough that you can crush everything that stands against you with overwhelming might." - TheAtheist8mthCommented[Before Grant became a guard for the Henzen family, he was a professional smuggler. He was well-known in his group for his cruelty and would eliminate anyone he viewed as useless and hindering]
- TheAtheist9mthCommented
This is Sooooooooooooo Retarded.How can someone be this Dumb?
"Hehe, nothing much. Since Mo Xiao can't come now, you can replace him and keep me company!"detailAfter Becoming a Solo Player, My Unlimited Skills Made Me InvincibleUrban · Traversing Nine Realms - TheAtheist9mthCommented
SO HARD TO READ THIS CRINGE.
"Don't worry. That is the last thing I want." Kane replied seriously. "She is a good girl and deserves a good life. Growing up in the city is already hard, but here Stacey is trying to make the most of it. And the same goes for you as well. To worry about your friend so much is strange nowadays. Most would not go so far, as many people do not know the meaning of true friendship. But you. You are different. You truly care for Stacey, and I am glad to know she has someone like you around while she is at school." - TheAtheist9mthCommented
I find this Conversation Unrealistic.I don't think people really talk about this kind of stuff because it makes them embarrassed, Especially Men as this somewhat counts as "Trauma Dump" and most men don't do that.I can accept her doing it but this whole conversation was iffy to me.
"But just the other day, my grandmother told me I should follow my dreams. That I should not be giving them all my earnings. But you know what, there was no way I could do that. So I searched for a second job. My goal is to write my own songs and better myself and allow my grandparents to live a luxurious life. I only have them as my family now. When they pass I will be left alone. With nothing to help motivate me to go further. This kind of thought scares me. What will happen when I am all alone? Will I shut myself off from the world or what?" Kane paused his steps and looked up at the sky while letting out a long sigh. He felt an arm hook around his. He looked down to see Stacey resting her head on his shoulder. - TheAtheist9mthCommented
I'm Cringing Massive.what Kind of conversation is this?
Kane choked on his own spit. He looked up at Helen and quickly waved his hands back and forth. "I wouldn't dream of it! I am not even looking for that sort of thing at this time. I have a lot going on. Stacey…. Well, she is quite cute, I will admit to that, but I do not have those feelings for her. Whether they develop later on, I do not know, but I promise I will never do anything that will jeopardize her future." - TheAtheist9mthCommented
Money enough to pay rent for 10 years?Couldn't he simply buy a house with that kind of money?
He did not live an easy life. Both his grandparents were disabled and were screwed over by the government. This meant they had nothing, and they all lived in the small two-bedroom apartment that he had used the money he had gotten in the settlement from his parents' life insurance after they died to pay the rent for ten years. - TheAtheist9mthCommented
One of my least favourite trope of characters, Annoying Women who meddle in other people's Business.Please Author, I beg You, Don't make her a recurring Character.And If you do, Please change her personality.Plus, Wouldn't it be a bad Idea for another person to know of MC's abilities?If they partner up, that's definitely gonna happen, So please Let him stay a solo character.I wouldn't mind partnering with NPCs tho.
She stretched her arms and let out a deep sigh. She then went back to town to complete more quests while she muttered to herself, "And what kind of name is Lord Schrodinger? Weirdo." - TheAtheist9mthReplied to JustBearWithMe
That's what I'm saying.
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