Justin_lake2

let's get it to the top its so underated. those bullshit coc,billanore this is better than those cancers. i don't know who writes those and who read those. but i loved your plots.

Its good to read but i think perspective should be changed so, we cna understand more about people around the story and get to see more character development.

It is fun to read and i actually enjoyed it. The only one thing which i think missing is the more detail about character and make it from viewer perspective it's little bit uneasy for me to read it from your perspective. And it will be easy to understand when we get to know thoughts of other peoples too. Overall it took my interest with only this chapter.