u miss something here. The MC turned to be calm because of the rituals which was done to him causing a mixtue of the strongest magical creatures with occlumency into him. It make him surprisingly calm, but the MC is still traumatic due to not talking about them to others. There's no way the MC be afraid of physical contact because thats what is so missing in Mc life, death of his parents early on, torture, force being calm due to beast blood, avenging his parents' death. no one will be afraid if this situations are to happen on someone whose mindset is to be strongest to avenge his parents death. additionally, he knew the HP plotline from previous line, with that its much more logical to make the MC to take revenge against the enemy instead of being dunche due to torture. He is not Neville Longbottom, he has gone years of life in previous incarnation, it gives him mature mentality. well not forcing, it is still so good to try this novel.

Straight forward, this novel is quite GOOD, good ideas, not the best but we can follow the story's progress to see the development to see how It will come out in the future ;) The Idea for the start of the novel of the MC is definitely surprising for readers. Although many novels and fanfictions have tried so and it always make the MC be "badass" which sounds cool. I don't think this is so. In my point of view, the MC is quite traumatic of the event. Thanks to his occlumency, which came out unexpectedly, made him calm, The apperance of the MC which most people said quite too much doesn't sound bad at all, its part of ALMOST every novels lmao the story development is just like every harry potter novel, the author can try to develop more of his current ideas and try to add some Original mysteries so we readers won't feel the story dull or easily predictable. Author should explore more of MC's weakness in the stories. I have no ideas about the dialogues and relationships of the MC. I feel like I can be improved, but I don't know how too. I have seen much more novels with better dialogues and relationship developments. Can author explore more on this???? Story development is standard for me. I respect the author's choice so matter if the author use the similar plot or adding more Original plot and characters to the story or not. It's author choice and I'm fine with it. I have seen a much better harry potter fanfiction stories in story development wise (the ff im refering to is the girl MC) OVERALL, I CANT WAIT to see how the story will go with the MC original spell? magic? whatever the dictions are xD. ALL THE BEST FOR AUTHOR, CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE. also, can we know ur update timetable? PLEASE MAKE A DISCORD PLEASEEEEEEEEE AUTHOR ;(

but it still worth a try thou