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Por favor continúa con la novela, es muy buena, es la mejor novela de teen wolf que he leído hasta el momento y la primera que termino, las demás son poco atractivas y no saben desarrollarlo bien. Continúa con esta, tienes un buen camino a seguir, los próximos capítulos dónde se enfrenten al grupo que acaba de llegar, y la bestia que invoca el doctor del terror, después puedes hacer más de vida diaria.
Thank you so much for your comment, I'll try to make the chapters longer, although I try not to overload the chapter. I would appreciate it if you continue to support the chapters; I'm uploading one daily.
It hasn't even started yet, I'm still assessing the family situation, it's at a slow pace, then it will accelerate.I'm still thinking about whether to involve the family in the town's dynamics; I won't involve the sisters, I'm considering whether or not to include her mother and her mother's friend, who are part of the core group; otherwise, I'll only develop those kinds of scenes with other women from the town, not them.
Thanks for commenting, I would appreciate it if you shared your opinions and added the story to the collection.
HAHAHAHAHA, He'll definitely look at more than just down
He doesn't even love the son; he was just a tool to have an heir. I invite you to read the other nine chapters I've written so far and leave your opinions. I'd love it if you left a power stone and added it to collections so it can reach more people and you can stay up-to-date with the latest news.
You're right, only in the first few chapters, then it changes completely. I appreciate you adding it to your library; I hope you'll find the time to read it in the future.
Thank you for your enthusiasm. We'll be updating with a new chapter later today. I hope you'll support it, and if the translation seems strange, it's because we used a translator.I am not a native English speaker
I'll upload another one today, don't worry. I'd appreciate it if you added it to your collection, or if you have any power stones to help it reach more people.
What a mediocre protagonist, he's almost omnipotent and yet he keeps plotting as if he were weak. He seems like a hypocrite. What was the need to kill Yahiko? Why help Madara? He says he doesn't care if he sets up an Infinite Tsukuyomi, and that it's more realistic for peace. What does he want? A Garden of Eden where he only needs to be with his wives and no one bothers him? Why would he want a dead planet? He might as well go to the moon. And why is he helping Madara do evil? What could he possibly gain from it, when his system allows him to have everything? He should have killed Madara and both White and Black Zetsu, and that would have been the end of it.