This is the official version and (I hope) this one will have no more changes. A full look.

This is the first sketch of Gary Bynum, the main character of the story. Soon I will be uploading some more detailed sketches that better illustrate the character.

Hello to all who have supported this story and continue to do so. It makes me very happy. I have started to rewrite the story and I am very happy with the result I am getting, so I hope you like it too. I have made some arrangements in the plot that you will notice as I progress and yes, now everything is well organized and planned. Sorry for the inconvenience above :C I hope you enjoy these adventures together with the protagonist and that the events surprise you as much as they surprised me while I was imagining them :D Be patient with the story as it is unfolding. I hope to provide illustrations for you soon for a better understanding. Sincerely, A.A.K

From what I have read so far I have to say that I am quite impressed. First of all, the narration is very good and I must say that the personality of the protagonist is very funny and well accomplished. The plot is interesting, the setting catches my attention and the attitude of the protagonist to her reincarnation is really funny. It is a 100% recommended story for those who like an isekai ... different? Totally.

The story is quite interesting. It mixes in a fun and attractive way two themes that attract a lot of attention: video games and zombies. It's like ordering a zombie apocalypse at home and not being able to stop until it's finished ... then you ask what's next? It is refreshing and very well built placing us in the video game without any problem. Furthermore the characters are charismatic and reflect a very credible reality.

Thanks, I'm still working on the title, it's difficult to put a good one on it :(

I have read this story it has taken me a bit to assimilate everything ... it is simply fun, original and simple. The protagonist is sent to a fantasy world after a rather irritating goddess slays him, literally with lightning; And that's where we say, what does it have besides a too funny start? Well this protagonist making use of his desire for compensation for ... killing him? he asks the goddess for nothing more and nothing less than a harem of catgirls! It is a funny story that makes us laugh on more than one occasion with crazy situations. Tracking down this perverted guy is 100% recommended.

The story has an intriguing beginning, starting with showing every aspect of the protagonist quickly bringing us into context. The narration and description is good, especially to understand what is happening and what the protagonist sees. The statistics are well explained giving a good playing environment. It also has a certain mystery that prompts you to continue reading to discover what happens and who is responsible for the events.

The whole story seems very interesting to me. The main characters are well built, showing the typical optimism of their age in the face of problems and thinking that nothing could really go wrong. The plot is original and, although it takes quite common elements like the teenage heroes chosen to save an alternate world, it copes with the creation of a mysterious and solid place in terms of explanations.

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It is a curious and quite original story about a young man who wants to be coveted by all women. It is supported by a system that sticks to him after his death and gives him ways to achieve his goal. For those who like the harem and the R-18 it becomes entertaining and intriguing, wanting to know what will happen to the protagonist and how he will reach his goal.

I have read a couple of chapters and I must say that it is both a refreshing and very addictive story. Starting with the title, it provokes the natural intrigue of getting an idea of what the plot will be and quickly falling into "and what will happen next", then just start reading to not be able to stop sinking into the facts. We meet people who love control in their lives, and it is impossible not to get excited to imagine how these people will face the changes that they have proposed themselves (voluntarily or involuntarily) The storytelling style is very entertaining and not as dense as stories with many descriptions or clarifications about characters could become. It has just what it takes for us to imagine the scene and not end up asleep. The characters are entertaining and realistic in terms of dialogue and emotions. I consider it a very good story, a very good work by the author.

The story is full of feelings that reach the reader with great delicacy allowing to feel each of the protagonist's thoughts. Go through highly detailed scenes adorned with a beautiful writing style that drags you deep into the words. Very good story :)

This story about the dramas of youth illustrates in a good way the life of a young man like any other who does not stand out too much. Both the protagonist and his friends reflect a reality known to many. It is interesting and refreshing, with well done characters.

It is a very interesting story surrounded by mysteries that makes you want to know at all times what comes next and what is around the protagonist. The new characters that are entering the scene are full of intrigue and the protagonist's common sense towards the things that his friend proposes to him makes one wonder if something deeper could be happening or is it just the imagination of a boy.

All right, the first thing I'll say is that this story has a very interesting plot in every way. The protagonist had the "great luck" to reincarnate in a world of magic, in a body even more allergic to flowers than her. I have laughed a lot with some dialogues and situations, it has really left me wanting to read more and more. It is narrated in a way that invites you to continue discovering about the life of the protagonist, both before and now. It is by far a story that I will follow closely.

It is an interesting story. It has magical elements that can lead to entertaining battles and lots of action. The protagonist is a young man full of passion and a sense of what is right who would undoubtedly help those in need with good friends who would cover his back.

This is a very nice story, I like its smooth way forward and how sweet it is. It's the kind that fills you with love. The characters are cute and you really want to know what will happen to the couple in the future. 💕💕

It is a very good book. I really like the way you write and I am very intrigued by how the plot will unfold. I look forward to more chapters. :)

The story is very entertaining, it keeps reminding me of an anime about magic and fantasy. The MC is a boy with an attractive character when you follow his trail while reading and his interactions with the girls around him are endearing and nostalgic, reminiscent of a good harem anime. :)