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awww, one of Loki's last posts...
I do hope our main character helps Mito go for a small insignificant spontaneous “walk”, and she somehow ends up in Uzu with all Uzumaki scrolls in Konoha missing and Konoha never sees her again.
how much is just disbelief of visions, vs the actual old greek curse of Cassandra never having anyone believe her whenever she speaks the truth?
So, is this a Good!Konaha, or BetrayingEveryone!Konoha where the Sarutobi present is the Herald of the coming Apocalypse and sells the Uzumaki out to the other villages?
they're going to end up in Warhammer aren't they.... and no one will even be able to tell the difference that she's arrived.
It still feels weird that the Uzumaki know there is an eminent attack upon them coming, and yet they’re playing a video game with a hope to get pets that will only be genin in the near term.
At this point, I don't even recall what he got for compensation for enduring "Nightmare Mode" or if it was just them screwing him over for the heck of it. Now, throwing this mission thing in without visible / tangible compensation just feels like another punishment. Having it be nightmare mode implies there are those out there somewhere in the cosmos who don't have to go through it, thus are living the easy life.
Wasn't White only really around for a few thousand at most? She was the leader of 1 of 12 hubs, the only one that survived that long. Shouldn't she have had tons of colleagues etc of similar rank who went down with the other hubs?
no thought whatsoever to using clones to ensure he doesn't destroy his arms if he blows up a rasenshuriken?
Well, I’m sure they won’t do anything like lo-jack him or put some sort of slave collar on him, This guy is a idiot.
They didn’t kill a single bad guy right, and thus, may have not fought at all when they arrived. Statements like this feel really strange in light of that.
Constant back to back missions with no break in between is getting rather tiring. We just finish the kidnapping mission and now it’s literally right into an underwater Atlantis visit which I assume absolutely must have some sort of crisis happening. Tone it back.
Feel like were dealing with a Danzo knockoff with him referring to him as a the Demon Container.
shouldn't the other Yokai group already have people practicing the new Senjutsu techniques as well? I would hope that would mean that the other terrorist group is going to get curbstomped without needing to call Yasaka's group for reinforcements, meaning Cao Cao's group ends up flattened here and now and never appears again in the story.
All Temari needs is a front row seat to what happens to Pakura. Pick up both of them for the betrayal
Hopefully Yang unlocks the aura of the other normie(s) too
could always slowly introduce her to a less stressful form like Tai-Chi while he actually gets lessons elsewhere. Just so long as this isn't some Marvel universe and he literally walks to a "Hand" related group and presents himself on a silver platter.
This is left over from the last version of the story. Danzo being able to keep long-term shadow clones multiple countries away makes him appear to be far stronger than he really has any right to be.
shouldn't Kakashi be like 2 or 3 at this point? If he's even born at all? Why is Kakashi being brought up.