no like to make fun or heavily criticize victims.

no worries

Nice

the child is dying

Great story to just sit back and relax and read. The formatting is a little weird but readable and even though the names are strange I think they add charm to the story.

please review my story Trapped in a mansion with my Nineteenth other classmates

a very nice start to any story. you are shown the type of character the mc is and shown her struggles. Like always continue on your journey as a author.

put it down. she was a gud girl.

It takes the standard xianxian formula and add little bit of mmorpg in it. I hope it doesn't go of the rails like certain other series and hopefully keep the current system. Other than that author keep up the good work.

a little cliche but okay.

nice

final saw it

nothing

okay, I'm staying tuned until then.

you almost avoided the question when talk about rules, but then it turned out she is in going through if not staying in allied territory.

lol

Nice start interesting concept, hope you continue of in the future with great endeavour. I wonder what was that in the beginning, I hope it's expanded on.

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awaken my muscle men.