u need to double check your chapters before u upload them because theres a lot of easy to change mistakes like calling aurors oros and other basic things

u need to double check your chapters before u upload them because theres a lot of easy to change mistakes like calling aurors oros

fast progression

is this on hiatus?

do you have an upload schedule?

its a good fanfic but the problem is that there are plot holes and also the grammar isnt good, the author forgets full stops/periods, puts big gaps in the middle of a monologue which makes the story less fun to read because it just pulls the quality down a lot even though the story is really good

AIDs brothers

can you change the - into speech marks, its harder to read without them

thx for the chapter

is this on hiatus?

thats probably the most stupid thing ive ever read, why would he not use the last wish, if he didnt want to have any more cheats he couldve atleast wished to be born a noble or something

your storys good but you need to fix the grammar and spelling, it makes the story harder to read so people will just drop it

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why did u delete your mha fanfic?

this is the best written fanfic ive ever read. from the way the story flows and the way the author perfectly captures the essence of the characters and builds onto them to the way you cant even tell that this isnt an original story becasue of how well written this is.

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rewrite

the story is planned out atleast but the grammar is horrible and the constant spelling mistakes make it seem as if im reading a horribly translated chinese novel.

is your hotd fic on hiatus?

dumbledoor should at atleast face some punishment for this and an investigation of his life from this becasue harry just exposed the "light" dumbledoor for killing his sister and indirectly creating voldemort and trying to control him just becasue of his magical prowess