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Big_Zer0

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Fic Writer. Mid Student. Overlord Fan.

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  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer02 years ago
    Replied to Luisz_Rodriguez

    And thank you for reading

  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer05 years ago
    Replied to Xshamee

    It's ok, take your time and focus on your uni work👍

  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer05 years ago
    Commented

    Is the story dropped or is it on hiatus?

  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer05 years ago
    Commented

    I actually just noticed but, are these idiots getting more retarted by the chapter? Artoria already revealed that Ainz, who is the god of death, is the dragon, yet they think that Ainz will die because he is Artoria's "minion"? They do realize that if Artoria was somehow capable of having a deity as a minion they already lost the battle? And besides, if Ainz did "die", aren't they the least suspicious that Ainz's sentinels that are in the city, still didn't disappear? And that the citizens did not cause a mass panic that the sentinels of the god of death disappeared mysteriously?

  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer05 years ago
    Commented

    I'm just waiting now for those idiots to understand that they ****ed up by messing with Ainz and Artoria. Thanks for the chapter by the way!

  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer06 years ago
    Commented

    So 'he' is actually a 'she', but 'she' herself is oblivious to that. Did you just pull a Keel from Rising of the Shield Hero? Because Keel as well didn't know she was a girl until everyone pointed it out for her and thought all her life that she was a man. And in all honesty, I never expected that at all, you just know how to surprise us huh?

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  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer06 years ago
    Commented

    I wonder what is God's opinion on these "followers". Good chapter by the way!

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  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer06 years ago
    Commented

    Take your time 👍

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  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer06 years ago
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    Ooohhh the foreshadowing of a tragedy... With only us readers along with God, Ainz who is now allied with the former and anybody else who knows about the Grail, will realise that it will never grant true wishes and would only corrupt them instead. Nice.

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  • Big_Zer0
    Big_Zer06 years ago
    Commented

    For the comment below about a harem and Xshamee replying to it. I see where Xshamee comes from. What makes a harem story bad is the fact that it always focuses on the the MCs doing...that...with their parties and not give two to three damns about the plot at all. If anything, 80% of the story would be about "that" and the remaining 20% is about a plotline that's not even well planned out at all. But this story can erase any of these troubles by the doing the following. First and the most important point, keep the harem to a minimum, and that would be just Artoria and God, and nobody else. Since these two are ones who Ainz seems to relax with the most, aside from his adoptive daughter Sakura and the angels from heaven who he could also start to see as his children considering that he will be taking God's role since she tricked him into more responsibility. And proof of this is Issei pervert Hyoudou, who's only goal in life is to be "the Harem King!". Which not only is cringe worthy, put gives me the urge to beat him into an non-recognizable pulp. And Ainz seems to fulfill my urges of beating him up by potentially doing that to him if Issei eyes Artoria, Sakura, Gabriel (since following the dxd timeline would mean that Ainz would take her to the conferences between the three factions along with Michael and would lead to Ainz seeing her as a daughter as well) or even God, if Ainz decided to reveal to every one that it was a trick all along. Two, is that the fact that in Harems it's somehow always about groping, inappropriate touching and other kinds of unspeakable stuff that for the innocence of the younger readers I will not mention, will do and would never focus on the plot at all. Yet for Ainz that wouldn't affect him considering his emotional suppressor being still in effect which would limit his already non existent libido along with his already existing morals of respecting women and not having enough courage to dare to do more than just a kiss or a hug (and this is actually canon by the way) since to him would make him think that he is acting like a douchebag, which would make him likeable as a character for the audience. And what would solve this issue is to only put what could put only be described as wholesome moments. Ones that would make you go "aa***..." or "that's so sweet". And besides, going with the plot that Ainz is an undead, God is a pure being and Artoria being a cinnamon roll who may think of herself as a badass when it comes to love but overheats and starts fumbling when someone just compliments her. It would be pure heresy to say that they should do more than wholesome moments, and I mean the type of heresy that would need to be burned with Holy Fire Warhammer40k style. And adding to the first point of not going beyond two which are already Artoria and God in this series is because whether you like it or not you harem loving weirdos, that's what makes these types of romance stories bad. Too much characters would result in the need of focusing only on romance to give the harem a "time to shine". But with limiting the amount of characters, each would get their part of the story or 'arc' and romance would be just a breath of fresh air after tension-filled scenes like a declaration of war or a character being in the middle of an existential crisis doubting themselves and if what they did up to that point would even matter. And it would allow the audience to choose their favorite character which wouldn't need to be the MC who is somehow always the one the story focuses on. Soooo... Yeah... That's all I have to see about the matter and... Thanks for reading this comment I guess?

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