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Finally! I’ve been waiting for maxi to be able to show off!

As shorts as these chapters are it should be possible to have more chapters to release more frequently.

I’m sure the pace of the story and relationship building is indicative of this story being around for a long time for our enjoyment, BUT the anticipation is absolutely killing me!

We need to see her come into her own and grow as a mage and I hope an offensive combatant. And then he be made to see she is as strong and worthy a mage as he is a knight

The arguing needs to end soon, it can’ keep up like this through the war. She is standing up for herself but she is still forced to run from him and go around his wishes like a child. I’m ready for a marital spar where she puts him back on his butt with some good magic and earns some respect from him or something. And then a steamy reunion worthy of this drawn out tension and anger after these years. Would love to see the princess maybe help her come into her own as not just a defensive/support mage but also an offensive mage and a noble lady worthy to lead. She already created that one spell, perhaps she could figure out how to use stronger earth spells offensively

Although some of the story is rushed, sometimes explanations of certain aspects are to wordy and consume to much of the chapter.

I really love this story and the potential it has. I already binge read everything available in two days. The author keeps apologizing about dragging certain things out but I actually appreciate the effort to build the story and actually think some things may seem a little rushed. Although I am anxious and ready for everyone to reunite at the academy and see him rub it in the heroes/heroines faces, I don’t want the story and relationships to progress to fast and run out of content. I’ve found other stories that I liked that drew me in like this one has but the authors either lose interest in their own work and quit or slow way down on releasing chapters, I hope this author keeps going strong with this story for a good long time! Really enjoyed it so far and appreciate the 2ch a day stability.

I absolutely love this! The characters are great and Lilith definitely seems to forshadow awesome things in the later chapters!This story drew me in to the point its torture having to wait for daily updates!!

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