Nice work.I really like your story.Please go on.Amazing.Characters feel more alive.Good work.Well done.Go on.👍I like this story a lot❤ so,keep it up

Nice and very descriptive. I really like this story.Excellent work.The characters are so much alive.The anger is really dreadful.A good work.I love this story.

Nice chapter

Well done👍

This is amazing.I am really feeling like I was also in there in the story.The characters are so much alive.I really like this story.Go on! An awesome story.