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I like your storyline, but some of the characters actions are so contrived. I have never heard of someone so excited by someone’s actions that their nose would bleed or burst. Also, Sei eating ice cream and having a bad reaction to his body. Every little thing Sei and Davi worry about each other even after the 5 year separation. Thanks for the 291 chapter climax for the details to be so generic and uneventful when Davi and Sei finally have ***.
The characters and story are very similar to Hellbound With You. Davi is Kelly, Abi, and Haru combined. Alex and Sie mirror each other. Zaki is simular to Xavior, and Kai and YiJun have personality traits in common. I Read Hellbound first and am up to chapter #417. I can’t get enough, so finding I Love You Monster quelches a thirst for more! Thank you so Much!!!