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Servitude074mthReplied to LittleRedsWolfExperience points: 0/660- Servitude074mthReplied to xXLordKhaosXx13
It was. I've seen translations that interchange demon/magic before. Translation issue maybe?
After increasing both Combat Power Level and Species Level, Gangzi's Purple Crystal Armor had turned into Magic Crystal Armor. - Servitude079mthCommented
intermediate
Giant Ugly Fish (beginner level) - Servitude071yrReplied to Helios_Sol
I think it's Qty-6 Tier-5/Lvl-1
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I'm not sure I'd agree with that, but ok. I'll humor you.
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Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO. This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language. Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC. As the author gains experience writing should get better. Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!
- Servitude072yrCommented
Make them your first undead!
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with all I had*
My own created martial arts wasn't for rules, it was to fight with all I got. - Servitude072yrCommented
#10,000BeforeBill
"Was I reborn in some kind of indigenous tribe?" - Servitude072yrCommented
HP should be 30 no?
HP: 21/21 > 33/33 - Servitude072yrCommented
Anihalates 80+ km surrounding mc village. Still commoner... -_-
Achievement Points: Commoner (68/200) - Servitude072yrCommented
Hmmm... Tell me more of this "bloodless" carotid artery technique.
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Ok, I can get over using "Cyanide" as a code name, but are we seriously using "the" Cyanide here? Me thinks it a bit too much.
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Say it again.
Lt. Julian Weber gazed across the construction project his unit was responsible for. As the U.S. involvement in the war in Afghanistan came to a close, he was stuck building a bridge in the middle of nowhere for some god-forsaken country. If there was one thing he had learned during his four years as an officer in the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers, it was unwise to criticize the high command's stupidity openly. - Servitude072yrCommented
Why spawn in underpants?
But since Liam was currently in his underpants, he still took these trash items and equipped everything. The three items of clothing each gave 1 defense point and his previous 2 defense immediately went up by 3 points. - Servitude072yrCommented
Dagger (Basic) = Highly skilled...right.
It was that skill that turned him from a total newbie into a highly skilled dagger user, one able to kill his opponent with one hit. - Servitude072yrCommented
Low key danger vibes.
Judging by what he had read in the diary, it was not safe around that area. - Servitude072yrCommented
Check inside the chest. If it had a backpack maybe it's got a bazooka too.
That unorganized, messy diary, other than providing some basic information for Kieran, also provided a clue: There had to be a weapon inside the body in front of him. - Servitude072yrCommented
Named himself Dell the Lucky. No truer words have been spoken. Until they weren't.
Hahaha, luck is really on my side! I’ve hit the jackpot! Not only have I found food, I have even found weapons! Please refer to me as Dell the Lucky from now on! - Servitude072yrCommented
KYS
Damn it, I’ve been robbed by a thug. The only canned food and water I had left is all gone, taken away by that scoundrel. What should I do now?