LOVED IT

Great beginning

WHAT A FIRST CHAPTER! Looking forward to moreeeeeeee

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yeah tajegood care of the obewho tortured you and enslaved you for 4 years. Even if it did strengthen him, she enslaved him and thats deserving of a revenge in my book.

when will we get to the timeskip? in 5 or 10 chapters? cause id rather wait out for this to reach there. The romance is getting kinda boring You can build it with some actual plot prigression arcs. all in all its a great fanfic so thx authour

we apreciate that authour

damn this is awesome, no playing around, no shirt talkin the mc every round just for him to beat the villain in the finals. plain and simple. really good

this is really amazing, finally a realistic mc. keep him like that and this will continue to be on the top. huge respect to the author

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